Spend a bit more time on organization, wording...

src/packager/P4.svelte

@@ -78,6 +78,10 @@
     justify-content: center;
     background-color: rgba(0, 0, 0, 0.75);
   }
+  .small {
+    opacity: 0.8;
+    font-size: 13px;
+  }
 </style>
 
 <svelte:window on:keydown={onKeyDown} />
@@ -86,19 +90,19 @@
   <Section>
     <h1>TurboWarp Packager</h1>
     <p>Converts Scratch projects into standalone files.</p>
-    <p>If you just want to embed a TurboWarp project into your website, see <a href="https://github.com/TurboWarp/scratch-gui/wiki/Embedding">Embedding</a> instead.</p>
+    <p>If you just want an easy way to embed a TurboWarp project into your website, see <a href="https://github.com/TurboWarp/scratch-gui/wiki/Embedding">Embedding</a>.</p>
   </Section>
 
   <Section>
-    <p class="new-outer"><span class="new">New!</span> We've made a major update to the packager. Here's the highlights:</p>
+    <p class="new-outer"><span class="new">New!</span> We've made some major updates to the packager. Here's the highlights:</p>
     <ul>
       <li>Packaged projects are smaller, faster, and have a redesigned loading screen</li>
       <li>Things like loading screens are easy to edit by editing the simple HTML/CSS</li>
-      <li>New features: Gamepad support addon, configuring cloud variables per-variable, better zip projects</li>
-      <li>License changed from GPLv3 to LGPLv3, talk to a lawyer to learn what that means</li>
+      <li>New features: Gamepad support addon, configure cloud variables per-variable, better zip output</li>
+      <li>License changed from GPLv3 to LGPLv3, talk to a lawyer to learn what that means (This probably benefits you)</li>
     </ul>
-    <p>A lot of things that were previously difficult are now trivial -- let us know what features and customizations you're looking for.</p>
-    <p>You can still use the <a href="https://packager.turbowarp.org/">old version</a> if you'd like, but it won't receive updates.</p>
+    <p>A lot of features that were previously rejected for being difficult are now trivial -- let us know what features and customizations you're looking for.</p>
+    <p class="small">You can still use the <a href="https://packager.turbowarp.org/">old version</a>, but it won't receive updates.</p>
   </Section>
 
   <SelectProject bind:projectData />

src/packager/PackagerOptions.svelte

@@ -143,7 +143,7 @@
 
   <!-- TODO: this is not ideal, the help should be in here -->
   <!-- especially as not all of these options are actually in advanced settings on the main site -->
-  <p>See the advanced settings menu in <a href="https://turbowarp.org/">TurboWarp</a> for more information about these settings.</p>
+  <p>See the advanced settings menu in <a href="https://turbowarp.org/">TurboWarp</a> for more information about some of these settings.</p>
 
   <label>
     <input type="checkbox" bind:checked={$options.turbo}>
@@ -186,7 +186,7 @@
     <input type="number" min="0" max="4096" step="1" bind:value={$options.stageHeight}>
   </label>
   <label>
-    Username (# will be replaced with random number)
+    Username (each "#" gets replaced with a random number)
     <input type="text" bind:value={$options.username}>
   </label>
   <label>
@@ -203,25 +203,28 @@
     <input type="text" bind:value={$options.app.windowTitle}>
   </label>
 
+  <h3>Controls</h3>
   <label>
     <input type="checkbox" bind:checked={$options.controls.greenFlag.enabled}>
-    Green Flag
+    Show green flag button in controls
   </label>
   <label>
     <input type="checkbox" bind:checked={$options.controls.stopAll.enabled}>
-    Stop All
+    Show stop sign button in controls
   </label>
   <label>
     <input type="checkbox" bind:checked={$options.controls.fullscreen.enabled}>
-    Fullscreen
+    Show fullscreen button in controls
   </label>
-
   {#if $options.controls.greenFlag.enabled || $options.controls.stopAll.enabled}
     <label transition:slide|local>
       <input type="color" bind:value={$options.appearance.accent}>
-      Accent color (background of controls)
+      Accent color (background color of controls when active or hovered)
     </label>
   {/if}
+  <p>If all controls are disabled, there will be no controls at all.</p>
+
+  <h3>Colors</h3>
   <label>
     <input type="color" bind:value={$options.appearance.background}>
     Background color
@@ -231,9 +234,10 @@
     Progress bar color
   </label>
 
+  <h3>Addons</h3>
   <label>
     <input type="checkbox" bind:checked={$options.chunks.gamepad}>
-    Gamepad support (no settings modal)
+    Gamepad support addon (no settings button or modal for now)
   </label>
 </Section>